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Mother And Mouse Chapter Two
Brand New Family

“Danny, Danny. Wake up Danny.”

“Mmm, five more minutes.”

“No, I’ve let you sleep long enough Danny. Come on, get up.” I yawned as I started to sit up. I rubbed my eyes to get the sand out before I opened them and looked up. Amy was looking down at me with a soft smile.

“Good morning Amy,” I said tiredly.

“Good morning Danny.” Amy picked me up and set me on her palm before she got out of bed. She stretched a bit before she set me on her shoulder and walked downstairs and into the kitchen where she set me down on the kitchen table. “Alright Danny, what do you want for breakfast?”

“Pancakes please!”

“Pancakes it is then.” She started taking out different things out of the cabinet. After she took out a few things, she suddenly stopped before walking over to the couch. She searched around a bit, then picked up a remote and turned on the T.V. She changed it from the news channel to a channel that had shows that I would like. I think it was called cartoonnetwork or something. “There you go. Now you don’t just have to sit and watch me cook.”

As Amy made the pancakes, I watched a show about two kids. One was a cat, the other was a fish. The cat was called gumball, which I thought was weird, and the fish was called Darwin. I was also kind of confused as to why the fish had legs, but I didn’t wonder for too long. The show was pretty funny to me, and I even heard Amy laugh a couple of times, though a few times I didn’t get the joke but she seemed to. Whenever that happened, I asked her to explain the joke to me, but she’d always say that I would get it when I was older. It was a little frustrating, but I didn’t let it bother me.

“Pancakes!” Amy announced as she brought a plate over.

“Pancakes!” I replied happily, causing Amy to chuckle. She set a plate down which had three pancakes. They were all too big for me though, but Amy solved that problem by cutting off a piece of one and setting it off to the side of her plate. She then put some syrup on it, and a little bit of butter, then handed me a little cloth. I was confused at first, but Amy explained.

“Well I don’t exactly have small utensils for you, so just eat with that so your hands don’t get dirty. Don’t worry though, I’ll get some utensils for you soon.”

“Okay!” I began to chow down on my slice of Amy’s pancake. With no questions from me, Amy began eating too. After we ate, Amy took the plates and put them in the dishwasher before coming back.

“Oh? Danny!”


“You’ve got syrup all over your face! Come here.” Amy licked her thumb and used it to clean my face, much to my displeasure.

“Amy stop it!”

“Hang on I’m almost done.” I squirmed a bit to show my discomfort, but the torture soon ended. “There, much better.”

I grumbled a bit, which Amy laughed at thinking I was being cute. Amy the picked me up and took me over to the couch. She set me down so I could continue watching while she grabbed a laptop, put on some glasses, and sat down next to me.


“Yes Amy?”

“I have a bit of work to do so I need you to be quiet for a bit okay?”

“Aw, okay.”

“Hey don’t be sad. Once I’m done, we can play for the rest of the day, how does that sound?”

“Okay!” I turned my attention to the T.V. and started watching. This time, the show was about this kid named Finn, and his talking stretchy dog Jake. They were in this wonderful magical world that was really cool, and they were on an adventure to find this book that could tell them all about being a hero! But they had to go through these really tough challenges, like unlocking the first door, stopping some fairy guys from killing old ladies, and facing a giant heart monster! I thought it was funny, and it was full of action and stuff, which was really cool!

There were a couple more episodes after that, and they were all pretty good. But as the shows went on, I started to get bored. I was just about to ask Amy when she closed her laptop and breathed a sigh of relief.

“Finally. Sorry that took so long Danny, but now I’m finally done!”

“Cool! I was starting to get bored.”

“Yeah sorry about that. So Danny what do you wanna play?”

“Hmm… I know! I wanna play hide and seek!”

“Hide and seek?”

“Uh huh! You hide first and I’ll find you!”

“Really? I’d imagine you’d wanna hide first.”

“Normally I would, but I’d have an advantage since I’m so small, so I’ll let you hide first.”

“Well aren’t you generous? Alright, I’ll hide then. How many seconds do I have?”

“Uh, twenty! I’ll start counting!” I turned around and covered my eyes. “One, two, three…”

I heard some shifting behind me, then a couple footsteps. I assumed that was Amy going off to hide.

‘I’ll find her in no time!’ I thought to myself. “... nineteen, twenty! Ready or not, here I come!”

I quickly looked around to check if Amy was hiding anywhere that I could see. However, there was no sign of her, so I decided to have a better look around. I climbed down the couch and started heading the way I heard her go. I eventually made it to a family room, thinking that she might be in there.

I began my search. There were two sofa chairs, a couch, and a coffee table. There weren’t a lot of places she could hide. I looked around the coffee table, but she wasn’t there. I checked around the first sofa chair, but she wasn’t there either. Then I checked the second chair.

“Found you!”

“Oh no!” Amy cried out. “However did you find me?”

“I just followed where I heard your footsteps.”

“Oh, so the little mousy can hear that well?”

“Not mousey! Neera!”

“Right sorry.” Amy got on all fours and started to tickle me. “Tickle tickle tickle tickle!”

“Ha ha ha ha! A-Amy stop it!” She tickled me awhile more before I finally managed to get her to stop. “Alright, now I get to hide and you have to find me!”

“Alright then.” She turned around and covered her eyes. “One, two, three…”

I ran off, trying to find a good hiding spot. I eventually made it back to the living room and hide underneath the couch. Then I laid down in the carpet, making myself invisible.

‘Heh heh, she’ll never find me here!’ I thought. Soon I heard Amy finish counting and walk into the living room.

“Ms. kitty is gonna find you little mousy! And when she does she’s gonna eat you up!” I laughed a bit at that, before quickly covering my mouth. I hope she didn’t hear me. Amy started searching around, getting awfully close to where I was hiding. But I knew she wouldn’t see me. When she looked under the couch, her eyes passed right over me. I quietly chuckled to myself for finding such a good spot.

Then something bad happened.

It was as if something was staring at me, and I could feel it. I froze up, then slowly turned my head. I saw eight eyes, two fangs, and a lot of legs and hair. It was a monster! The monster hissed at me before it started running in my direction.

“AH!” I screamed. I got up and ran as fast as I could. Amy must have heard me, because she immediately looked in my direction as I ran. The moment I was out from under the couch, Amy scooped me up into her arms.

“Danny? What’s wrong?”

“T-There’s a m-monster under there!” I replied shakily. I started to cry as Amy held me close.

“Shh, it’s okay Danny. I’m here now, I’m here. There’s no monster. Shh.” Amy pet my back as she tried to calm me down, but I was so scared. She sat down on the couch and continued to try and calm me down to the best of her abilities.

“I… I want my Mommy!” I cried out. Amy froze for a second, not sure what to do. She continued to try and calm me down, but it wasn’t working. Not knowing what else to do, Amy started singing me a song. It was in some weird language I had never heard before, but oddly enough it sounded a lot like the lullaby my Mommy used to sing for me. I started to calm down from hearing the familiar tune, my loud wailes turning into quiet whimpers. When she finished the song, I had managed to calm down. She gave me a sad smile.

“You okay?” I shook my head.

“Nuh uh.”

“Oh, poor thing. Wanna do something else?” I shook my head before burying my head in Amy’s arms.. I just wanted to stay in Amy’s arms where I felt safe. Amy held her sad smile while she started petting my back. I was still slightly crying, and Amy didn’t know what to do to cheer me up. Then she got an idea. “Wants some cheese?”

I looked up at her and nodded my head. She smiled at me before getting up and walking to the kitchen, with me still cradled up against her. She walked over to the fridge, grabbed the block of cheese, and then grabbed a knife. She cut off a piece, then gave it to me. I hungrily grabbed the small piece and ate it.

“Better?” I nodded a bit.

“Uh huh, thank you Amy.”

“No problem Danny. Now, do you wanna watch a movie?”

“Movie? What’s a movie?”

“It’s like a really long T.V. show with no commercials.”

“Oh, okay!” With a smile, Amy walked back over to the T.V. She set me down on the couch before walking over to a cabinet below the T.V. screen and opened it up, revealing a bunch of movies! She looked through several of them before finally taking one out.

“This is one of my favorites.” She put the movie into some kind of player and started it up before coming back to the couch and setting me on her lap. She grabbed the remote, pressed a button, and the movie started up. It was called El Dorado, and it was really good! I thought it was really funny, but again some parts I didn’t get that Amy did. When the movie finally ended I applauded it with glee.

“Can we watch another one?”

“Heh heh, sure.” And for the rest of the day, Amy showed me the magic of movies. Before long, we had dinner, then it was time to go to bed. Amy brought me up to her room again. She set me down in my bed and tucked me in. Then she started singing me that song again, just in case I had trouble sleeping. It was so strange how similar it was to my Mommy’s song. I was extremely tired, so when I started to fall asleep, instead of saying good night Amy, I said…

“Good night… Mommy.” Then I drifted off to sleep. Amy was shocked at first, but then had a smile on her face.

“Good night, my little mouse.” She then kissed the top of my head, and got into bed with a happy sigh. Amy had always wanted to be a mom, and so she swore to be the best mommy ever.
Mother And Mouse Chapter Two

  Alright, done with chapter two! So basically now that Amy and Danny have had a day of fun, it's time for the family stuff to begin. Next chapter will have the two growing closer together as mother and son. Tell me what you guys think!

Mother And Mouse: Chapter One
The Beginning

“Go son! Go!” A neera woman said as she tried to move a young neera boy through a nearby mousehole. “We’ll be right behind you! I promise.”

“But mama!”

“Just go!”

“Well well well, what do we have here?” The neera woman stopped and turned to see a giant green haired neko woman staring down at them. “Are my little snacks trying to get away?”

The neko was about to reach out for the two neeras when something hit her in the head.

“Ow, what the?”

“Hey bitch! Over here ya fucking broad!” A neera man taunted. “Let’s see if yer fat ass can catch me ya wanker!”

“Now that’s not very nice,” the neko said as she reached for the neera man. He however was a bit too nimble and slipped through her fingers.

“Catch me if ya can ya tuna lovin lunatic!” The neko chased after the neera, slightly offended by the little mouse’s comments. The neera woman looked at her son before she hugged him, tears in her eyes.

“I love you baby, now go!” The little neera nodded before running through the hole. He ran as fast and as far as he could, eventually making it outside where he collapsed, exhausted. The boy laid there, not moving as he took in his situation. He was alone, and his mother and father were gone. The little neera boy began to cry.

Hi there! My name’s Danny, and I’m a neera! I’m five years old, I like the color blue, and my favorite food is cheese! I have brown hair, tan skin, and mouse ears and a tail that are brown too! It’s nice to meet you.

After the day Mommy and Daddy disappeared, I’ve been on my own. I get lonely a lot, but otherwise I’m okay. Anyway, now I live in a new house. I’m not too sure how I got here. I do remember some birds finding me on the sidewalk, and taking me away somewhere. At first I was scared, but then I got tired and I wasn’t scared anymore. Then, when I woke up, I was just outside another house. This one wasn’t near my old house, so I thought it was safe. There was even a mouse hole outside to let me in!

Now, I live alone. Well, not alone alone. I mean, there is the neko lady that lives here, but she’s never seen me before. I made sure to always hide before she knows I’m there. She seems nice, but I’m too scared to talk to her. If you wanna know what she looks like, she’s very tall, has tan skin, and pink hair as well as ears and a tail!

Life here isn’t so bad. There’s quite a few hidden holes in places that make it easy to get things like food and stuff. I guess the last neera that lived here was pretty set, because when I found a spot to sleep in, there was already a bed there and everything. At first I was afraid that I was intruding in on someone’s home, but I’ve been here for at least a week now and I haven’t seen anyone else so I guess I’m okay.

Normally my life isn’t that exciting. When I’m hungry, I find food, and when I’m tired, I go to sleep. But today, today was different. Today was the start of a whole new life for me. Me, and my mommy.

It all started when one day, I was getting really hungry. I started climbing around in the walls, making my way to the kitchen. As I climbed up the pipes, I noticed something. It, was, cheese!

“Yummy!” The cheese was just sitting there one top of a little metal plate. I didn’t know why it was there. I mean, it wasn’t there before. I hope no one minds if I take it.

I quickly ran up to the cheese. It was just outside of the mousehole on the ground level of the house. Licking my lips, I swiped the cheese from its pedestal and was about to take a bite when suddenly.


“Owwy!” Something had landed on my tail, and it really hurt! I looked back to see some sort of metal bar laying on my tail. It really hurt! I tried to get my tail out, but it wouldn't move. I started to cry. What if I couldn’t get my tail out? Would I be stuck here? “Mommy! Daddy! Help me!”

Soon I heard the thundering sound of footsteps. Oh no! The neko lady was coming! I struggled with the metal bar, trying to get it off my tail, but it wouldn’t budge! All I could do was sit there and cry as the neko lady walked around the corner.

“Hey what’s that- Oh my gosh!” The neko lady quickly made her way to me getting on all fours to see me easier. “Oh hang on little guy, I’ll get you out!”

She quickly pressed down on a lever on the other side of the metal thing the bar was attached to, and it lifted off my tail. The neko lady then picked me up and held me close.

“Oh shh shh shh shh. It’s okay, it’s okay. The traps off now it’s okay. Shh.” She pet me gently as I cried. I looked up at her face in fear.

“P-P-Please d-don’t h-hurt m-me.” I cried.

“Oh no, I’m not gonna hurt you. What makes you think I would do that?”

“B-B-But the last n-neko lady made M-Mommy and Daddy disappear!”

“Oh you poor thing!” The neko lady hugged me gently with one hand while the other pet my head in an attempt to comfort me as I cried. After a few minutes, I eventually managed to calm down a bit. “Now, how about you tell me your name little guy?”

“M-My name’s D-Danny, *sniffle*.”

“Well Danny, my name’s Amy. It’s very nice to meet you.”

“Uh h-huh.”

“Now, since you were trying to eat that cheese, I can assume you were hungry?”

“Uh huh.”

“Well, would you like some food?”

“Yes, *siffle*.” With a smile, Amy took me over to the counter and set me down. She went over to the fridge and opened it up. She started looking through it, as if searching for something.

“Come on, where is it? Ah here we go!” She brought out a block of cheese and closed the fridge. She then went over to the counter and grabbed a knife. She then cut off a small piece, which was actually kind of big to me, and set it down next to me. “There you go little guy.”

“Cheese!” I grabbed the small block and started to eat it, Amy watching me with a smile. It took me a little while, but eventually I managed to finally finish. “Thank you Ms Amy.”

“You’re very welcome Danny. And Amy is just fine.”


“So Danny,” Amy began as she picked me up and set me in the palm of her hand, “how did a little mouse like you end up in my home?”

“I’m not a mouse! I’m a neera!”

“Right sorry. So how did a little neera like you end up in my home?”

“Well, it happened right after… right after Mommy and Daddy disappeared.” Amy gained a concerned look but let me continue. “Mommy had made me go outside while she and Daddy distracted the neko woman. I was scared, and alone, and really tired. When I started to fall asleep, some nice birds found me and took me away somewhere. Then I woke up in front of your house and ran inside.”

“Oh, I’m so sorry.”

“It’s okay, it wasn’t your fault.” Amy gave me a soft smile.

“Well Danny, it’s getting pretty late. It’s probably past your bedtime.” I nod before letting out a small yawn. “Aw, you're so cute! Alright come on, I’ll make you a bed so you have somewhere to sleep tonight.”

Amy went over to a counter in a corner and opened up a cabinet. She searched around a bit before finally pulling out two bits of cloth, a cotton ball, and a box of cards. Setting me on her shoulder, she emptied the box of cards before heading upstairs and into her bedroom. Once there, she set the box down on top of her nightstand. She then put the two bits of cloth in, one to act as a bedsheet while the other was a blanket, and then set the cotton ball in, which acted like a pillow. Taking me off her shoulder, Amy put me in the bed and tucked me in.

“Good night Danny.”

“Good night Amy.” With a smile, Amy left the room, presumably to take care of work or something like that. I however quickly fell asleep.

I dreamt a pleasant dream at first. I was running around in a green field on a sunny day, playing with my Mommy and Daddy. Then, the sky suddenly turned red, and there was a loud stomping in the distance. I was starting to get scared, but when I looked around for Mommy and Daddy, I couldn’t find them.

“Did you really think I’d let you escape?” I froze before slowly turning around. It was that green haired neko lady, but now she looked even scarier. She had red eyes, and sharp teeth and claws! She reached down and grabbed me, lifting me high into the air. She dangled me over her head, giving me a terrifying smile. “Down the hatch!”

She opened her mouth, and dropped me in.

“AHH!” I woke up in fear. I immediately started to cry out. “Mommy! Daddy!”

I heard a loud shuffling next to me before something big picked me up and held me close.

“Shh, shh, it’s okay. It was just a dream.” It was Amy. She cradled me in her arms as I cried, trying to ease my fears to the best of her abilities. “It’s alright Danny. I’m here. Shh, shh, it’s okay Danny. I’m here.”

After a while, Amy finally managed to calm me down. I was still scared, but at least I wasn’t crying anymore. Amy held me out with a concerned face.

“Are you alright?” I shook my head.

“Uh uh.”

“Oh, poor little guy. Do you wanna sleep with me?” I nodded solemnly. “Alright then.”

Amy carefully laid back down in her bed, then set me down right below her head, but where she could still see me. She brought over the cloth I used for a blanket and tucked me in again before pulling the cover over herself.

“Alright Danny, now get some sleep okay?”


“Good. Good night Danny.”

“Good night Amy.” I then quickly fell asleep, and didn’t have any nightmares for the rest of the night
Mother And Mouse Chapter One
Cute little series I'm starting up. Based off of an RP I did with this guy: bowser-and-himself2.deviantart…

Anyways, not too sure when I'll post the next chapter. Soon hopefully! But tell me what you guys think!
Hey everyone! So recently wrote a one shot undertale fanfic, and I thought it went pretty well. SOO~ I'm gonna start writing a series for it. It's going to be called, Dragontale, and you'll see exactly why it's called that once the story really gets started. Let me know what you all think!


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Boob-Slave Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
hey... are we still RPing?
Prince-Zodiac Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry, I've been busy as of late. Mind resenting the RP?
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jedipat Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
Hey, may I do an MLP GTS RP with you?
Prince-Zodiac Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Depends. What were you thinking?
jedipat Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017
Something where the Mane 6 ponies (Twilight Sparkle (Unicorn), Pinkie Pie, Applejack (her hat grows with her), Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Fluttershy) grow bigger.
Nick-west Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017
Hey, can we continue our RPs, please?
Prince-Zodiac Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah sorry I've been really busy as of late.
Nick-west Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017
Ok, I sent notes of both RPs twice cause I didn't know if you received them or not
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